joycejoyce01142020-12-18👍231 需要改正,你不介意吧,我帮你改改咯 today i have come to a garden, which a lot of people was inside than ever before, and there are old people playing badminton, young people playing basketball, their grandmothers were dancing, and they all know the importance of exercising, every day i have to exercise, i hope you will all have to exercise, so the body will become better, and just last week, i participated in the games, although i did not win the prize, but i like sports, allowing myself to become stronger. 今天我来到了一个花园,里面有比以前更多的人,老人在玩羽毛球,少年人在玩篮球,他们的婆婆们在跳舞,他们都知道运动的重要性,每天我会运动,我希望你也要运动,这样你的身体才会越来越好,上个礼拜,我参加了一项比赛,虽然没有赢,但是我喜欢运动,让我变得越强。 希望帮到你啦。。。